Putting dialogues

Learning Intention:

Use dialogue in our writing.

Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
Speech marks.
The correct punctuation.
Start a new line when someone else is talking.

Your task is to write a dialogue between the two men in the picture above. Use the clues in the picture to give you an idea of what they could be talking about.

A conversation between friends:

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One day in the floating market two man is trying to negotiate with the other man. “Hey how much is your radish?” said the man in the grey shirt.

The man in the black shirt replied “I’m selling it for $2, what about you what are you selling?”   

“I’m only selling a lot of carrots and some radish. How many people already came and bought from you?”

“Many people that is why I only have potatoes and radish,”

“Ok” So they went on with their business.

Consequences

RWC moment in time

Haiku poems - 4 seasons

Writing instructions

Writing instructions for how to upload a YouTube video into your blog.

The Bigfoot recount

On Wednesday We done Bigfoot. Bigfoot is learning how to ride a bike. They told us that when you’re on the road you need a lot of stuff and what the road safety are. When you’re turning you have to at least put you’re hand for 3 seconds in the direction that you’re going to. After we fitted our helmets and got our bikes they tested us of how good we can stop on the line. There was

team 1 and team 2. Then after we done the test we moved to stopping and signaling. Then we moved over to a game where it’s a game and test at the same time once you get caught with your fit on the ground or hit and if your hand are not on the breaks your out.

My 6 step sentence story

Once upon a time there was a kid named Jacky who love to play sports. He lives in L.A in a place called MajesticEgleSashsquat it was like a place where mansions are all over the place. But his talent is Gaming he plays game half of everyday. But he has got a problem his dad is always angry when he plays game all the time his dad wants him to find a job and not sit 12 7 playing game and he is a youtuber and that is his job. He felt so embarrassed because his stuff is always ruined by his dad and he feels sad and angry about his dad. Jacky solved his problem by actually getting a job and his job is a soccer player and a youtuber so that he can stick to gaming and sports.

Description writing of Batman

The actual person behind the mask is bruce wayne and batman lives in a mansion but under is his batcave with all his weapons. batman’s mask hooks up with his cape that is so powerful that he can glide all around the city. his cape is a shiny silk. Batman saves and fight people but doesn’t overbored the law. Batman loves all his bat in his batcave. Batman’s got his sidekick all the time. Batman wears black so at night nobody knows he glides in gotham city.

Writing with Mr Murray

Intro

Tuesday 17-03-15 it was the swimming sports in the Wesley Intermediate swimming pool. So the whole point is to compete and have fun.  The whole school came to compete for their houses and there rooms. So I competed for the 9 Swimming sports event. I heard the whole school shouting for the people representing their houses.

The water was cold so as the blazing wind, it was like, I was in the high mountains of Mt Ruapehu.The water tasted like Expired water although I tried to not drink it. People around me smelled like the swimming pool and made think “a swimming pool walking?” and conrit smelled like the swimming pool too!

My action was like am I going to drown or get eliminated in the 2 laps swimming events or in the backstroke but it turned out good I came 1st on both the events. I was so so happy when I got out a lot of people cheered me up. I felt like a champion I made into the final but I came 3rd in the backstroke and last for the 2 laps event but overall I was not a loser I felt good and proud of myself.

A lot of people said to me “yeyah Paolo” and “Shot paolo.” I was thinking if they actually mean it or they were just joking. They made me think that they liked my performance. My teacher of my house also made me happy.

My character description

WALT describe a character

Success Criteria:

• Describe 3 to 4 main points about how they look
• Describe their personality

Choose 2 of these characters and write a description about them :

My 1st character looks like pearl from spongebob squarepants but he is a cowish looking. He has got a big mouth with ugly teeths. He’s back head is like a Zebra mohawk.  His hands looks like stitches fingernail. So basically i’m talking about pearl, zebra and stitch.   

My character’s personality  like a kind and funny guy. He helps out his village and he a famous guy in his village.

                                                                                    

My E-Asttle writing test

In a beautiful city of Los Angeles a mysterious lab where nobody can locate between Los Angeles and Las Vegas.

Then one day a kid named Adam Brice lived in Canada but moved to Los Angeles. Then Adam and his friends decided to go for a bike. Then when they left the house they had everything foods, lighter, tents, sleeping, bags and everything you need on an outdoor adventure. After 2 hours of biking they all found a massive flat circle. When Adam and his 5 other friends checked it out they fell on a hole then Adam fell on a different hole pressing a red button that makes almost everything disappear.

When Adam and his friends got out of the hole, all the grass disappeared and there bikes and stuff disappeared almost the whole world disappeared the house, the fishes, the buildings, all the cars had disappeared. The only thing thats is left is the humans and the grounds no rock no wall no animals and no foods also no road. The sea was just a big crater with sands, no salt water just pure wet sand. And no cities or satellites in the outer space and no dresses like shirts, short, or bra even undies are all gone you can see everyone in distance.

The only way to get everything back was to the lab and cut the red wire. The problem is they don’t know where the lab is. They had to walk around until they fall through a hole. Everyone else fell into the hole. When Adam’s friend tried cutting the wire 5 big monsters came and stopped them but Adam found a railgun that does an instant kill but the monsters had heaps of health. So Adam needed to shoot them 50 times in 5 mins or else the whole world end no more humanity for eternity. In the last second Adam shot the last monster and cutting the red wire and everything turned back to normal.    

My Hypothesis letter

Dear Mr V

My question is “What will happen if I become a professional gamer in the future?” do you think my question is an open, undermining, charged, practical, connected and rich questions. My dreams are to be a sportsman and a gamer, because being a gamer makes me a happy guy and being a sportsman is a fun thing running around getting muddy and getting ripped body. But mostly I want to become a gamer so that I become famous in sports and gaming throughout the whole world. Gaming has been around my life since I was 4 I go to my computer and play some bayish game until grew up more games came out and then in 2006 my father died and youtube came out and then I started seeing people playing game all the time I would subscribe to them. But one day a dream and a question came to my mind saying I want to be a Gamer and how will my future become if I am a Gamer earning 100 hundred dollar a month or even in a week if I am so famous.

Sports came to me when I was 8 I mean gaming has a big difference between 4 years. Gaming is my childhood and my brother taught me how to play games and all the websites he uses for playing games. 2 years ago I met a youtuber named Speirstheamazinghd on youtube and then the following year I met another youtuber named Jacksepticeye then like 4 weeks ago a guy named Mcjuggernuggets. I could find out my answers by looking at the youtubers that I mentioned specially PewDiePie. PewDiePie is the best Youtuber he lives in sweden and the only way I could communicate with him is to ask my question on his latest video.  

My question is important to me because I would want to have a fun job in the future. I could become a gamer when I come home and record for 10mins a day. If I become a gamer there is - and + sides of being a gamer because Mcjuggernuggets was kicked out of his actual house and so he stayed at his uncles house. The positive side of being a gamer is you earn money and you go on different places every year and you go worldwide on the internet.  

I want to see how what gamers went through before being a gamer whether they kept getting in trouble for playing too much or there parents were proud of their sons.  I also want to know how Professional Gamer earn money by just playing games?

I could come across my question is by actually doing it everyday for 4 to 3 hours. Another way to find is to go to Pax East. Pax East is a gaming convention it happens year by year. So professional gamers go to that convention. Then ask gamers of what they think what they feel about being a gamer and how much do they earn.  

This is an important question to me because it means a lot to me. I get in trouble for playing too much but day by day I keep on playing no matter what.