I am a Year 7 student at Wesley Intermediate School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Power Hive 08 and my teacher is Mr Vermeulen.
the poems are great i personally like the spring and summer one.next time make the sentences a bit longers
Wow i liked how you put every season in your slide show,but i think one thing you could work on is your grammari also liked how you used lots of similes.
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the poems are great i personally like the spring and summer one.
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Wow i liked how you put every season in your slide show,
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i also liked how you used lots of similes.
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